tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2616911720195016984.post4785657988485721208..comments2023-04-29T10:57:27.496-04:00Comments on Fish Head Soup: A Little Bit of Everything in One Pot: January Poempatriciacaspershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17048071609997739569noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2616911720195016984.post-35262466108847497602010-01-29T18:36:08.797-05:002010-01-29T18:36:08.797-05:00Thanks for your comments! I'm glad it was a hi...Thanks for your comments! I'm glad it was a hit because it's hard for me to write anything without characters-- although, I guess I did slip in that grandma at the end. :)<br /><br />Marie, I'm still weighing my fewer/less options. I like the sound of "less," but I'm stuck on the grammar.patriciacaspershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17048071609997739569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2616911720195016984.post-53615752580205289422010-01-21T21:13:55.387-05:002010-01-21T21:13:55.387-05:00I was so enjoying the mystery (because I'm a l...I was so enjoying the mystery (because I'm a little language dense) and the slow shiver of beautiful phrases when my face broke into a full grin at "drive where you like." You, I believe, may be developing a inner, ancient Yankeeness. Thanks for the colorful whiteness. And again, a perfect jewel of a title! <3, fmfAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2616911720195016984.post-29138565218415068982010-01-21T16:33:02.677-05:002010-01-21T16:33:02.677-05:00Lovely! I particularly enjoyed the icicly, kind o...Lovely! I particularly enjoyed the icicly, kind of declarative pause I found myself on as I began these lines:<br /><br />the sharpest air<br />holds little water;<br />expect few crystals,<br />faux neige<br /><br />You are incredible. Thank you!!!Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12036945607733860186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2616911720195016984.post-44217031493069943582010-01-21T16:12:31.875-05:002010-01-21T16:12:31.875-05:00Oh this is so good! "sun-struck sky", th...Oh this is so good! "sun-struck sky", the salting of foreign words, and the ending just the right touch. One nit:<br /><br />"<i>unutsi</i> is art<br />that never points<br />in <b>(fewer)</b> than six directions"<br /><br />I would use "less" instead. Just my 2 cents to take or leave. Thanks for posting this, really enjoyed!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com